I recreated the first song I made public entirely but kinda in the same subject about being left alone
The old song is just a cliche hero journey with lame lyrics and the new one is about a breakup.
The highlight I think is the change in my writing over time and less reliance of AI to help
For those interested:
Control Settings
Weirdness: 65%
Style Strength: 80%
Audio Strength: 40%
negatives: Male Vocals, Auto-Tune
Thanks for Listening.
Stay safe and keep rocking 🤘
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He left his coat
On the back of the chair.
Still smells like firewood
And something I can’t name.
One glass half full,
The other untouched.
I trace the rim
With my fingernail,
Too slow.
I don’t cry anymore.
But my chest won’t stop echoing.
It’s a lonely road
When no one sees you vanish.
You keep walking
Like it matters.
Like they’ll notice
When the silence shifts.
I forget his laugh
But not the way
He would leave the room
Before he finished a sentence.
Some wounds
Don’t want to heal.
They just nest in your ribs
And hum at night.
I don’t ask why
The questions never answer back.
It’s a lonely road
When even your shadow
Gives up.
You wear your name
Like a wet coat
Heavy, shapeless,
Clinging.
If he were here,
I’d say nothing.
I’d just let the silence
Do what it does best.
It’s a lonely road
And I walk it like glass
Slow
Barefoot
Feeling every crack.
It’s a lonely road
And it won’t remember me.
But I keep going
Because something in me
Refuses to fade quietly.
Still smells like firewood.
Still tastes like goodbye.